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Success students have similar characters. First, they are hard workers. They always use their time to study. Also they always try to find some new knowledge. Furthermore, they never give up when they fail and they consider it be a lesson to do better than before. Second, they are discipline. They finish their jobs on time and do the best for it. They don’t waste their time that can delay that job. Beside it, they are always consistent with their words which they told and their promises. Third, they are active. They can’t stay at home and do nothing. So that sometimes they join many extracurricular programs in their schools/universities. For example, they follow an organization and a course. Moreover sometimes they have a part time job to pass their spare time. The last, they are responsible. They are responsible to everything that they have done, to keep others people’s believability and to obey their parents desire who finance them to get better education and be success person in their future. Indeed those characters are good for us. We can imitate it in order we are be success students too.
Approaching boy needs some strategies. Firstly, we must know his character. The character means something that related to his behavior whether he is anger, adventurous, diligent, responsible, etc. From his character we can find some ways to approach him which is suitable with it. Next, we must have good appearance because it will draw his attention. If we have a tidy appearance, he will feel happy and like to see us. Then, we must care to him. For example when he is sick, we visit him, bring some fruits for him, remind him to have his medicine as doctor prescription, eat at least twice a day. All of those care will make him happy every with us. After that, we must love him the way he is. We must understand whatever his condition whether he is poor, rich, lazy, careless and we be a good friend who will be side of him every he has some problems. Finally, if we do those strategies, we will be success approaching boy and getting his love.
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hi girl, you are there, aren't you? i think that approaching someone else is something easy, but the more important thing is how to maintain our relationship with the one, isn't it? or you will get more comments on kanzulfikri.wordpress.com.so what is your response?
Well, I think this revised version is much better than the one you submitted to me. Now, the ideas are clearly explained (even though some explanations are not comprehensive enough). But, please always check the grammar and vocabulary as I have still found incorrect word like "believability" which should be "belief". After all, I'm very pleased with the improvement you made... Good. Happy blogging and writing girl.... :D
Thank u very much for your comment,..N i always will try to make better my paraghraf
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